My penpals

Do you have any foreign friends like Chinese, Japanese and American. I have some pen-friends. One of them is colton Welch who inhibits in American. He is freshman in highschool. He sometimes played Maple Story with me. First, I recommanded him to play the game. He enjoyed playing the game. That makes me so happy. He and I promised to meet someday. Then we will play the game together. He is kind and gentle. When I have difficulty solving English questions, I aksed him about the question. Then he helped me solving questions. Besides, He helps improving not only my English knowledge, but also communication skill. Now I do appreciate his hand. Thanks for reading !^^

Hi there [이름], I really appreciate your effort in doing this composition. I had fun reading this one. Yes, I do have foreign friends from different countries. You have to treasure your friends and thank Colton for being there when you\'re in need. Have time to check my grammar corrections my dear. All in all you did great in this first composition you sent me=) T.Liza   Do you have any foreign friends like Chinese, Japanese and American.>>Correct >>OR Do you have any foreign friends who have different nationalities?I have some pen-friends.>>CorrectOne of them is colton Welch who inhibits in American.>>One if them is Colton Welch who lives in America.He is freshman in highschool.>>He is a freshman in his high school.He sometimes played Maple Story with me.>>CorrectFirst, I recommanded him to play the game.>>I was the one who first recommended to play that game.He enjoyed playing the game. That makes me so happy.>>CorrectHe and I promised to meet someday. Then we will play the game together. >>CorrectHe is kind and gentle. When I have difficulty solving English questions, I aksed him about the question. Then he helped me solving questions.>>CorrectBesides, He helps improving not only my English knowledge, but also communication skill. Now I do appreciate his hand.>>Besides, he helps me to improve not only my knowledge in English but also my communication skills. I do appreciate his hand.Thanks for reading !^^ >>Correct. >>Or Thanks for your time in reading this composition^^.