My personal life’s activity.
학생이 쓴 원문
One of my favorite activities in my personal life lately is sewing. Making clothes for teddy bears and puppy dolls is really cute. I also enjoy singing. Singing high-pitched songs makes ms feel good and refreshes my stomach.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
One of my favorite activities in my personal life lately is sewing.
>>> CORRECT!
Making clothes for teddy bears and puppy dolls is really cute.
>>> CORRECT!
I also enjoy singing.
>>> CORRECT!
Singing high-pitched songs makes ms feel good and refreshes my stomach.
>>> Singing high-pitched songs makes me feel good and refreshes my stomach.
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