My Personality
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The one thing I will not change myself is my personality. Everyone has thier own personality, so it can be their characteristic and also it is very hard to change.
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Hi [이름]:)
That\'s true. Our personalities gives us character. It is what differentiate us from others.
The one thing I will not change myself is my personality.
>> CORRECT
Everyone has thier own personality, so it can be their characteristic and also it is very hard to change.
>> Everyone has their own personality, so it can be their characteristic. Also, it is very hard to change.
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