my personality (homework for 10.05)
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m far from active person. To be honest, I\'m a bit shy person.
It\'s hard for me to communicate with unfamiliar people.
But I don\'t be afraid when it comes to some critical moments that I should have courage.
I think I have a lot of worries. Sometimes I can\'t entirely enjoy the moments that I should be happy.
So I tried to fix it for some years and it became better now.
I am affectionate person. I love my family and friends very much so I do my best to be good at them.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Loki! You have answered
the question appropriately. You
were able to use good expressions in your homework. However, be careful with articles and prepositions please.
- Debbie
>> I\'m far from being an active person.
To be honest, I\'m a bit shy person.
>> To be honest, I\'m a bit shy.
It\'s hard for me to communicate with unfamiliar people.
>> This is a good sentence.
But I don\'t be afraid when it comes to some critical moments that I should have courage.
>> However, I am not afraid when it comes to some critical moments that I should have courage.
I think I have a lot of worries.
I think I have a lot of worries.
>> This is a good sentence.
Sometimes I can\'t entirely enjoy the moments that I should be happy.
>> This is a good sentence.
So I tried to fix it for some years and it became better now.
>> Hence, I tried to fix it for some years, and it is better now.
I am affectionate person.
I am affectionate person.
>> I am an affectionate person.
I love my family and friends very much so I do my best to be good at them.
>> I love my family and friends very much, so I do my best to be good to them.
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