My personality is passable to my job in my own thought.
학생이 쓴 원문
My personality is not important as I think.
My job pays well comparing to working time. That's all.
What I planned to do is playing the violin at home.
I learned it from the university but I already played it from my younger days.
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Wee!
Thank you for doing your homework ^^
I hope you are having a great evening ☺
Talk to you tomorrow ☺
My personality is not important as I think.
>> My personality is not important, I think.
My job pays well comparing to working time.
>> My job pays well compared to others.
That\'s all.
>> CORRECT
What I planned to do is playing the violin at home.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: What I planned to do is to play the violin at home.
I learned it from the university but I already played it from my younger days.
>> CORRECT
Thanks for reading.
Bye.
>> CORRECT
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