My personality with some adjectives.
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m a sociable person. And I try to be kind and thoughtful for everyone. Also, I\'m adventurous personality. I love new place where i have never been. It makes me so excited even by thinking some new thing.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Ellie!^^
Thank you so much for finding time to accomplish your homework.
You did a good job here!^^ I\'ve read it well. Thus, I have made some modifications you can review later.
I will talk to you again on Monday. Good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
I\'m a sociable person. And I try to be kind and thoughtful for everyone.
>>> I\'m a social person, and I try to be kind and thoughtful to everyone.
Also, I\'m adventurous personality.
>>> Also, I have an adventurous personality.
I love new place where i have never been.
>>> I love to go to places I have never been.
It makes me so excited even by thinking some new thing.
>>> It makes me so excited even thinking about something new.
>>> OR: It excites me just thinking about anything new.
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