my pets

2012-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Ihave a unique pets. THey Iguana and sea-crow. Iwasn't raise really long. Hummmm... I raise two iguanas and one sea-crow. They are so cute. I can't catch my sea-crow but I can catch my Iguanas. And I can give them to take a bath. When push them into the a little hot water. they love the water. My favorite animals I LOVE YOU&*

강사 첨삭

Hi Justin! It\'s been a while since you wrote a composition! I want to commend you for doing this every now and then. That\'s definitely an E for Effort!  Here are some corrections for you, take note of them. I wanna see some pictures of your strange pets! Haha!  You\'re such a unique kid. Talk to you tomorrow! CIAO~ ~Teacher Marie~ Ihave a unique pets. >> I have unique pets.THey Iguana and sea-crow. >> I have an iguana and a sea-crow.Iwasn\'t raise really long. >> I haven\'t raised them that long. OR >> It\'s only been a short time since I started raising them.Hummmm... >> CORRECT OR >> Hmm...I raise two iguanas and one sea-crow. >> I am raising two iguanas and one sea-crow.They are so cute. >> CORRECTI can\'t catch my sea-crow but I can catch my Iguanas. >> CORRECT OR >> It\'s difficult to grab my sea-crows and pet them but I can do that with my iguanas. - betterAnd I can give them to take a bath.>> And I can give them both a bath. When push them into the a little hot water. >> I push them into a little tub of hot water.they love the water. >> CORRECT OR >> They love the water. **Take note of proper capitalization.My favorite animals >> These are my favorite animals.I LOVE YOU&* >> I love you. *I think your composition is incomplete... or maybe you typed this by mistake. Hehe. ^^

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