my pets
학생이 쓴 원문
Ihave a unique pets.
THey Iguana and sea-crow.
Iwasn't raise really long.
Hummmm...
I raise two iguanas and one sea-crow.
They are so cute.
I can't catch my sea-crow but I can catch my Iguanas.
And I can give them to take a bath.
When push them into the a little hot water.
they love the water.
My favorite animals
I LOVE YOU&*
강사 첨삭
Hi Justin! It\'s been a while since you wrote a composition! I want to commend you for doing this every now and then. That\'s definitely an E for Effort! Here are some corrections for you, take note of them. I wanna see some pictures of your strange pets! Haha! You\'re such a unique kid. Talk to you tomorrow! CIAO~
~Teacher Marie~
Ihave a unique pets.
>> I have unique pets.THey Iguana and sea-crow.
>> I have an iguana and a sea-crow.Iwasn\'t raise really long.
>> I haven\'t raised them that long.
OR >> It\'s only been a short time since I started raising them.Hummmm...
>> CORRECT
OR >> Hmm...I raise two iguanas and one sea-crow.
>> I am raising two iguanas and one sea-crow.They are so cute.
>> CORRECTI can\'t catch my sea-crow but I can catch my Iguanas.
>> CORRECT
OR >> It\'s difficult to grab my sea-crows and pet them but I can do that with my iguanas. - betterAnd I can give them to take a bath.>> And I can give them both a bath.
When push them into the a little hot water.
>> I push them into a little tub of hot water.they love the water.
>> CORRECT
OR >> They love the water.
**Take note of proper capitalization.My favorite animals
>> These are my favorite animals.I LOVE YOU&*
>> I love you.
*I think your composition is incomplete... or maybe you typed this by mistake. Hehe. ^^
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