My phobia
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I have a phobia about dogs. I like to see dogs but when they come close to me I can’t do anything. I cried a lot because of dogs. If I raise a dog or spend time with dogs I might overcome it, but I don’t have opportunity to play with dogs. I hope I can overcome it someday.
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I have a phobia about dogs.
>> CORRECT (This is called Cynophobia :)
I like to see dogs but when they come close to me I can’t do anything.
>> I like looking at dogs but when they come close to me, I freeze.
I cried a lot because of dogs.
>> I used to cry because of dogs.
If I raise a dog or spend time with dogs I might overcome it, but I don’t have opportunity to play with dogs.
>> If I raise a dog or spend time with them, I might overcome it but I don\'t have the opportunity to do so.
I hope I can overcome it someday.
>>CORRECT
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