my plan
학생이 쓴 원문
I am at home. and I will go to hospital and go to my company.
I will leave the office about 3 hours.
and I am going to shop for fishing. I have a plan of fishing nextday. It will be rainning saturday. but i am ok. There have a roof. I must catch many fish .
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. Good luck on the fishing, have fun!
- T. Beth
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I am at home. >>> correct
>>> OR: I\'m at home now.
and I will go to hospital and go to my company.
>>> I will go ot the hospital then go to my company.
>>> OR: I will go to my company after dropping by the hospital.
I will leave the office about 3 hours. and I am going to shop for fishing.
I will leave the office about 3 hours. and I am going to shop for fishing.
>>> I will leave the office in three hours and I am going to shop for some fishing necessities.
I have a plan of fishing nextday.
>>> I have a plan to go fishing the next day.
It will be rainning saturday. but i am ok.
>>> It will be raining this Saturday, but I am okay with that.
There have a roof.
>>> There is a roof there.
I must catch many fish .
>>> I must catch many fishes.
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