My plan.^^

My original plan was to stay in Australia until next year. But, i changed my plan about one month ago. So, i came back my country. That's why i thought i couldn't study in Australia. There were some problems. Anyway, my new plan is to go to England next year with my friend. I really want to learn speaking English. That's why i really work very hard these days. I have two part time jobs. I can't take a rest including weekend. It is very difficult to work every days. But if i want to go to another country, i have to endure my situation. I think it looks like one part of my life. In my opinion, to reach for my goal is very difficult. However, i will try to achieve my dreams.

Hey there [이름]! Keep dreaming [이름]. One of the most successful men in the world said that a goal properly set is halfway reached. Many great things started with a dream, and I hope you reach yours. Anyway, I'm looking forward to talk to you later. Here are your corrections: -Teacher JM -   My original plan was to stay in Australia until next year. But, i changed my plan about one month ago.  >>>My original plan was to stay in Australia until next year but i changed my plan about one month ago.  So, i came back my country.  >>>So, i came back to my country.  That's why i thought i couldn't study in Australia.  >>>That's when i thought i couldn't study in Australia.  There were some problems.  >>>I had some problems there. Anyway, my new plan is to go to England next year with my friend. >>>Correct.I really want to learn speaking English.  >>>I really want to learn how to speak English well. That's why i really work very hard these days. >>>That's why i'm really working very hard these days.I have two part time jobs.  >>>I have two part time jobs. I can't take a rest including weekend. >>>I can't take rests even on weekends. It is very difficult to work every days.  >>>It is very difficult to work every day. But if i want to go to another country, i have to endure my situation.  >>>CorrectI think it looks like one part of my life. >>>CorrectIn my opinion, to reach for my goal is very difficult.  >>>In my opinion, it is very difficult to reach for my goal. However, i will try to achieve my dreams. >>>Correct