My plan

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~T. Lynn

I told you In last weekend I went to the ocean world where is one of the most famous water park in korea.

>> I told you last Friday that we will go to the Ocean World which is one of the most famous waterpark in Korea.
 So many people usually go there in summer to swim and ride the slide and enjoy playing with their family and friends in the water.

>> Many people usually go there in summer to swim and ride the slide and enjoy playing with their family and friends in the water.
 This place is near from Seoul.

>> correct!

 It almost spends 2hours to go there.

>> It takes two hours to go there.
 It is not the season when many people go there.
>> correct!
So i could enjoy riding slide and swim without waiting time.

>> So I could enjoy sliding and swimming without waiting for a long time (or waiting in line). 
 Fortunately it was good weather after the raining at the day before that day.

>> Fortunately, the weather was good. It rained the previous day.

Everything was good to enjoy it.
>> Everything was good so we enjoyed our time there.
Now all of my plan was finished.

>> Now all of my plans were finished.

 And i have to back to the work. so i am here.

>> And I have to go back to work so I\'m here.
 But i can have one more memory with my family.
>> But I want to have more memories with my family. 
I want to go other water parks in this year as i can

>> I want to go to other waterparks this year if I can.
 Also i want to go your country and enjoy the sea.

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