My plan

2018-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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Hi good morning. Im happy to hear your voice again. Even if today is monday that is first day of the week. Actually I dont like monday than friday. I want all weekday becomes friday. ^^ Anyway On saturday it was rain in all day but I went to the garage for repair my car. It was almost 1 hour to repair. And I usually went to the skate stadium for my children to skate on Sunday And cleaned my car as they skated. As reparing and cleaning my car, I become to like my car again. So i will paint the bumper of my car by myself as soon as possible. I have plan to buy paint and equipments for it. It makes me exciting. How about your weekend?

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!(\",)

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~T. Lynn

Hi, good morning.

>> correct!
 I\'m happy to hear your voice again.

>> correct!
 Even if today is monday that is first day of the week.

>> Even today is a Monday, the first day of the week.
 Actually, I dont like monday than friday.

>> Actually, I don\'t like Mondays.
 I want all weekday becomes friday. ^^
>> I want it to be Friday all week.
Anyway On saturday it was rain in all day but I went to the garage for repair my car.

>> Anyway, on Saturday it was raining all day but I went to the garage to get my car repaired. 
 It was almost 1 hour to repair.
>> It took almost an hour to finish repairing my car.
And I usually went to the skate stadium for my children to skate on Sunday

>> I usually go to the skating rink with my children on Sundays.
 And cleaned my car as they skated.

>> I cleaned my car while they were skating.
 As reparing and cleaning my car, I become to like my car again.

>> As I was repairing and cleaning my car, I started liking my car again.
 So I will paint the bumper of my car by myself as soon as possible.

>> correct!
 I have plan to buy paint and equipments for it.

>> I plan to buy paint and other equipment.
 It makes me exciting.
>> It makes me feel excited.

OR>> I\'m excited to start repainting my car.
 How about your weekend?

>> What about you, how was your weekend?

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