My plan
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Hi, good morning.
>> correct!
I\'m happy to hear your voice again.
>> correct!
Even if today is monday that is first day of the week.
>> Even today is a Monday, the first day of the week.
Actually, I dont like monday than friday.
>> Actually, I don\'t like Mondays.
I want all weekday becomes friday. ^^
>> I want it to be Friday all week.
Anyway On saturday it was rain in all day but I went to the garage for repair my car.
>> Anyway, on Saturday it was raining all day but I went to the garage to get my car repaired.
It was almost 1 hour to repair.
>> It took almost an hour to finish repairing my car.
And I usually went to the skate stadium for my children to skate on Sunday
>> I usually go to the skating rink with my children on Sundays.
And cleaned my car as they skated.
>> I cleaned my car while they were skating.
As reparing and cleaning my car, I become to like my car again.
>> As I was repairing and cleaning my car, I started liking my car again.
So I will paint the bumper of my car by myself as soon as possible.
>> correct!
I have plan to buy paint and equipments for it.
>> I plan to buy paint and other equipment.
It makes me exciting.
>> It makes me feel excited.
OR>> I\'m excited to start repainting my car.
How about your weekend?
>> What about you, how was your weekend?
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