My plan
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
Good plans! I hope you can do all these for one month. Good luck!(\",)
~Lynn
Work and Holiday is just around the corner, so I am nervous and fluttering.
>> My working holiday to Australia is just around the corner so I am nervous and my heart is fluttering.
I already have finished everything to prepare for it and I just need to improve my English speaking skill before going to Australia.
>> correct!
I referred many videos from youtube to know and ready to W&H.
>> I watched many videos from YouTube to know/learn and get ready for my trip.
It is important to get a job to maintain my lifestyle in Australia, so there are several specific things to acheive my purpose.
>> It is important to get a job to support myself in Australia, so there are several specific things I must do to achieve my purpose.
First, I will write a resume and make several copies.
>> correct!
When I just arrived at Australia, I need to find house to live and then find jobs.
>> When I arrive in Australia, I need to find a house then a job.
If I have several copies of resume, I will be able to give those to managers in shorter time.
>> correct!
Second, I will have a time to research and arrange the basic grammer because I can explain my purpose to the other people more clearly if I can use expressions exactly.
>> Second, I will have to make time to research and practice the basic English grammar because I can explain my purpose to the other people more clearly if I can use expressions correctly.
I will be satisfied if I do these two things before going to Australia.
>> I will be satisfied if I can do these two things before going to Australia.
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