My plan for career
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Thank you so much for this wonderful composition. I see that you are really observant. Keep up the good work.
Good luck making your plans possible. As for the corrections, please be able to study them well.
Congratulations for a job well done.
-RJ-
I was surprised when I saw an English teacher in the US.
>>Correct!
His major was advertisement and he went back to school to study politics when he was 34 years old.
>>Correct!
It seldom happens in Korea.
>>Correct!
I envy the mind.
>>I am envious.
>>While thinking about him, I felt envious.
They seem like they are enjoying their lives trying to figure out what they want to do and stick to their interest not just for their career.
>>Correct!
The system which select students for medical school will be changed in a few years.
>> The system which selects students for medical school will be changed in a few years.
Now, they select students for master degree among universty graduates but in the future, they will change the system and select high school students for bachelor's degree.
>>Now, they select students for master's degree among universty graduates but in the future, they will change the system and select high school students for bachelor's degree.
I think I have to use current system.
>> I think I have to use the current system.
So, I'll take the exam in this august and I think I'll have other opportunites which I can do what I want during my school.
>>In conclusion, I'll take the exam this August and I think I'll have other opportunites which I can do what I want during my school days.
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