My plan for holidays
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I’m planning to spend the holidays with my family. I will eat delicious foods and watch music awards. I want to go out but it is too dangerous now. So this year I’ll just listen to christmas carol at home, but next year I hope I can go out and enjoy christmas.
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I’m planning to spend the holidays with my family.
Happy New Year!
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I will eat delicious foods and watch music awards.
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I want to go out but it is too dangerous now.
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So this year I’ll just listen to christmas carol at home, but next year I hope I can go out and enjoy christmas.
>>So this year I’ll just listen to Christmas carol at home, but next year I hope I can go out and enjoy Christmas.
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