My plan for July
학생이 쓴 원문
Unfortunately, there are a lot of things I have to do during July and August.
It\'s summer vacation but I\'m going to school every day.
Therefore my plan for July is to write a report for department evaluation.
However, I will try to do my best with joy.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
It\'s good to be busy.
However, don\'t forget to take care of yourself.
Remember to live your life to the fullest.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Unfortunately, there are a lot of things I have to do during July and August.
>> Unfortunately, there are a lot of things I have to do in July and August.
It\'s summer vacation but I\'m going to school every day.
It\'s summer vacation but I\'m going to school every day.
>> Correct
Therefore my plan for July is to write a report for department evaluation.
Therefore my plan for July is to write a report for department evaluation.
>> Therefore, my plan for July is to write a report for department evaluation.
However, I will try to do my best with joy.
However, I will try to do my best with joy.
>> Correct
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