My plan when I will retire
학생이 쓴 원문
when I have went foreign travel. I have drunk little at night because I had many schedule. my travel was a package .
Package travel a very comfortable but have a lot schedule and shopping center and special activity.
I promised foreign travel to my wife when I will retire.
I want free travel. so I have studied english with power english.
Do you think my english skill is improve.
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. I can say that you an actually have decent conversations in English. You can manage to do small talks spontaneously. Just continue practicing.
- T. Beth
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when I have went foreign travel. I have drunk little at night because I had many schedule. >>> When I traveled overseas, I drank a little at night because I had a lot in my schedule the following day.
my travel was a package .
>>> My travel was a package tour.
Package travel a very comfortable but have a lot schedule and shopping center and special activity.
Package travel a very comfortable but have a lot schedule and shopping center and special activity.
>>> Package travel is very comfortable but has a lot of schedule like going to the shopping center and doing special activities.
I promised foreign travel to my wife when I will retire.
>>> I promised to travel a foreign country to my wife when I retire.
I want free travel.
>>> OR: I want to travel freely.
so I have studied english with power english.
>>> So I have been studying English formally.
Do you think my english skill is improve.
>>> So I have been studying English formally.
Do you think my english skill is improve.
>>> Do you think my English speaking skill has improved?
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