My plan when I will retire

2020-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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My friend booked flights before one years. He has went overseas trip each years with his wifes. Maybe he has went 15 country. I envy him because I have 5 overseas trip. I said you my plan. My plan will go to overseas trip after my retired. so I save the money for this. At that time I will go overseas trip three or four trimes each year.

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this. This is such a good plan. I hope to do this too when I retire.

- T. Beth
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My friend booked flights before one years.

>>> My friend booked flights a year ago.

He has went overseas trip each years with his wifes.

>>> He has been on overseas trips each year with his wife.
Maybe he has went 15 country.

>>> He has probably been to 15 countries.

I envy him because I have 5 overseas trip.

>>> I envy him because I only have 5 overseas trips.

>> OR: I envy him because I have traveled to only 5 countries.

I said you my plan.

>>> I will tell you my plan.

My plan will go to overseas trip after my retired.

>>> My plan is to go to overseas trips after I retire.

so I save the money for this.

>>> So I am saving money for this.
At that time I will go overseas trip three or four trimes each year.

>>> When that time comes, I will go to overseas trips three to four times in a year.

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