My presentation script

For a month, I‘ve prepared the experiment. This figures are the preparations for the test. This figure is ROV(Remotely Operated Vehicle) that is used to verify my research. The next figures show the 1394 camera that is used to estimate the position of ROV, the 2m/10m cable and the repeater that connect the cable with extension cable. I’ve programmed using Visual C++ 2008. The first part represent the communication with ROV. If I click the open button, the laptop and the ROV will be connected. The second part is sensor display. If I click the send button, the laptop will send the protocol to the ROV and the current depth will be displayed. The third part is joystick interface. If I click the open button, joystick and laptop will be connected. The start button makes the joystick connect with the ROV. Next, I’ve designed the depth controller for depth keeping. The first step is to calculate the depth error. The second step is to calculate the control input using the error.

This is a very technical composition. I\'m impressed how well you\'ve used the vocabularies here in your composition.  Well there are some suggestions I\'ve listed there. Talk to you later. :)   For a month, I‘ve prepared the experiment. >>For a month, Iive prepared the experiment. (I\'m sorry I couldn\'t read the name of the company so I just put \'live\') This figures are the preparations for the test. >>This figures are for the preparations for the test.  This figure is ROV(Remotely Operated Vehicle) that is used to verify my research. >>Correct!  The next figures show the 1394 camera that is used to estimate the position of ROV, the 2m/10m cable and the repeater that connect the cable with extension cable. >>Correct!  I’ve programmed using Visual C++ 2008. >>Correct! The first part represent the communication with ROV. >>The first part represents the communication with ROV. If I click the open button, the laptop and the ROV will be connected. >>Correct! The second part is sensor display. >>Correct!  If I click the send button, the laptop will send the protocol to the ROV and the current depth will be displayed. >>Correct! The third part is joystick interface. >>Correct! If I click the open button, joystick and laptop will be connected. >>If I click the open button, the joystick and laptop will be connected.  The start button makes the joystick connect with the ROV. >>Correct!Next, I’ve designed the depth controller for depth keeping. >>Correct! The first step is to calculate the depth error. >>Correct! The second step is to calculate the control input using the error. >>Correct!