My presents.

2022-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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First, I have minigun when I am 9 years old. I like that present. Second, I have a domino set when I am 8 years old. And I like it too.

Wow! I envy you! You got so beautiful presents, [이름]. Thanks for sharing about that! See you soon!

~T. Annie

First, I have minigun when I am 9 years old.

>>First, I had a minigun when I was 9 years old.
I like that present.

>>I liked that present.

Second, I have a domino set when I am 8 years old.
And I like it too.

>>Second, I had a domino set when I was 8 years old, and I liked it too.

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