My priorities in looking for a job
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When I look for a job, I consider various factors such as salary, job position, company position, company atmosphere, etc. Among them, I think work-life-balance is the most important. I think life without personal life will be difficult even though I earn a lot of money. On the contrary, yes. The balance between work and life seems to be the most important.
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>>> correct
>>> OR: There are many factors I consider when looking for a job such as salary, job position, company position, company atmosphere, etc.
Among them, I think work-life-balance is the most important.
>>> correct
I think life without personal life will be difficult even though I earn a lot of money.
>>> correct
On the contrary, yes. The balance between work and life seems to be the most important.
>>> correct.
>>> OR: Indeed, the balance between work and life seems to be the most important.
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