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2020-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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My project Manager proposed me new role. That was project result checked. my job was IT enginneer. I was in the top ten on that field in the korea. I had made IT infra in samsung, SKHynix etc. I was surprised that result. I checked code that some enginner made. but the code was bad all of them. I asked him if he didn`t know that. By the way he told yes. He always told to be very busy. but He watched web site and made a call. he worked for 2 years in the SKHynix. I always told him to check your code. IT infra that I checked will be open next month.but I am convinced fail. 50 enginners had been involved in the project for 2 years. This result wan`t only just his reponsibility. I told my project manager and customer manager to check the code last year and early this year. but he told me that he checked that. Project manager knew that lately. I fixed the code until the end of this months.I am worry about that

강사 첨삭

Hello Sir John. Thank you for this.

- T. Beth
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My project Manager proposed me new role.

>>> OR: My project manager proposed to me a new role.

>>> OR: My project manager asked me to take on a new role.

That was project result checked.

>>> That was to check the result of the project.
my job was IT enginneer.

>>> My job was an IT engineer.
I was in the top ten on that field in the korea.

>>> I was in the top ten of that field in the Korea.

I had made IT infra in samsung, SKHynix etc.

>>> I had made IT infra in Samsung, SKHynix, etc.

I was surprised that result.

>>> I was surprised by that result.

I checked code that some enginner made.but the code was bad all of them.

>>> I checked the code that some engineers made but all of them were bad.

I asked him if he didn`t know that.

>>> correct
By the way he told yes.

>>> He said yes.
He always told to be very busy. but He watched web site and made a call.

>>> He always said he was very busy but he watched some website and made calls.

he worked for 2 years in the SKHynix.

>>> He has worked in SK-hynix for 2 years.
I always told him to check your code.

>>> I always told him to check his code.
IT infra that I checked will be open next month.but I am convinced fail.

>>> The IT infra that I checked will be open next month, but I am convinced it will fail.
50 enginners had been involved in the project for 2 years.

>>> 50 engineers had been involved in the project for 2 years.
This result wan`t only just his reponsibility.

>>> This result wasn\'t only his responsibility.

l told my project manager and customer manager to check the code last year and early this year, but he told me that he checked that.

>>> correct

Project manager knew that lately.

>>> The project manager only got to know about that lately.
I fixed the code until the end of this months.I am worry about that

>>> I have been fixing the code these past months. I am worried about that.

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