My pronunciation is terribel.

2011-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I want to say in English well. But, It's difficult to me. Specially, My pronunciation is terrible. I took a flight to go to Vietnam last Summer. In airplane drink service, I asked the steward to give me a beer. He brought a can of beer. And he tried to open the can. I did not want to open it. Because I want to bring it to my hotel room. So I told him that "Don't open it" But He looked never being understood. And He was back to bring another beer. He brought Calsburg! He was heared "Calsburg" to "Don't open it" Oh my god!! My pronunciation is very terrible. So I have to study and practice hard. *** My teacher Samantha is sick. I concerned her. I wish her a speedy recovery.

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Hi there! Thank you for your composition today! Please be guided by the corrections provided below. Have a nice day! I want to say in English well. >> I want to speak English well.But, It\'s difficult to me. >> But it\'s difficult for me.Especially, my pronunciation is terrible. >> Correct.I took a flight to go to Vietnam last Summer. >> Correct. >> I took a flight to Vietnam last Summer.In airplane drink service, I asked the steward to give me a beer. >> In the airplane service, I asked a steward to give me beer.He brought a can of beer and he tried to open the can. >> Correct.I did not want to open it because I want to bring it to my hotel room.>> I did not want to open it because I wanted to bring it to my room in the hotel. So I told him that \"Don\'t open it\" >> So I told him, \"Don\'t open it.\" >> So I told him not to open it.But He looked never being understood. And He was back to bring another beer. >> But he seemed to misunderstand me and he went back bringing another beer.He brought Calsburg! >> Correct.He was heared \"Calsburg\" to \"Don\'t open it\" >> He heard \"Carlsburg\" instead of \"Don\'t open it.\" Oh my god!!>> Correct.My pronunciation is very terrible. >> Correct.So I have to study and practice hard.>> Correct.*** My teacher Samantha is sick. >> Correct.I concerned her. >> I am worried about her.I wish her a speedy recovery. >> Correct.

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