My proudest moment.
학생이 쓴 원문
I have been working in industrial automation for 16 years. My job are developing programs, supporting customers and teaching engineers. As I said, I know how to control electricity and developing programs. Some engineers want to get advice from me, when they start a new project. I have been supporting a customer from last summer. He isn\'t familiar a system that I supply into Korean market from Germany. The customer and I spent hard summer to finish the project. Finally the customer succeeded the project. While I was supporting him, he wanted to hire me. And he said to me, \"Just being beside me, you motivate me.\". At that time, I was proud myself.
But I couldn\'t enter his company. Because he was my boss. At that time, I didn\'t like him.
강사 첨삭
I have been working in industrial automation for 16 years.
>> I have been working in Industrial Automation for 16 years.
My job are developing programs, supporting customers and teaching engineers.
>> Correct.
As I said, I know how to control electricity and developing programs.
>> As I said, I know how to control electricity and develop programs.
Some engineers want to get advice from me, when they start a new project.
>> Some Engineers want to get advice from me when they start a new project.
I have been supporting a customer from last summer.
>> I have been supporting a customer since last summer.
He isn\'t familiar a system that I supply into Korean market from Germany.
>> He isn\'t familiar with a system that I supplied into the Korean market. It was from Germany.
The customer and I spent hard summer to finish the project.
>> The customer and I spent a hard summer finishing the project.
Finally the customer succeeded the project. While I was supporting him, he wanted to hire me.
>> Finally, the customer succeeded in the project. While I was supporting him, he wanted to hire me.
And he said to me, \"Just being beside me, you motivate me.\". At that time, I was proud myself.
>> And he said to me, \"Just being beside me, you motivate me.\". At that time, I was proud of myself.
But I couldn\'t enter his company. Because he was my boss. At that time, I didn\'t like him.
>> But I couldn\'t enter his company. Because he was to become my boss. At that time, I didn\'t like him.
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