My purpose in this world is making much money.
학생이 쓴 원문
Money is everything to me.
And Happiness is second.
Your feedback is too smart and short.
And homework is easy.
강사 첨삭
My purpose in this world is making much money.
Money is everything to me.
And Happiness is second.
Your feedback is too smart and short.
And homework is easy.
My purpose in this world is earning much money. I think if I will be able to pursue this goal, I will have a purpose in this world. Money is everything to me, happiness is second. I believe that if I will have much money, happiness follows.
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