My reason

2019-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Eunice. My name is [Name]. I’m 21 years old, Hannam university in Deajeon. My major is Chinese economy trade. This not economy of Chinese. Why am I study English and Chinese? This reason I want to go abroad internship and enter Korea company in international sales. Now I’m not good at speak English, is not come true. But I continuously effort for my dream, It’s is surely come true.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for dropping by the board, Jennifer!
Persevering towards achieving your goal is the key for you to be successful. I admire you for having that confidence in you. Keep it up and don\'t give up! See you around!
~Teacher Eunice

Hello, Eunice.
>>> correct!
My name is [Name].
>>> correct!
I’m 21 years old, Hannam university in Deajeon.
>>> I’m 21 years old, and I\'m studying in Hannam University in Deajeon.
My major is Chinese economy trade.
>>> correct!
This not economy of Chinese.
>>> It\'s not about the economy of China.
Why am I study English and Chinese?
>>> Why am I studying English and Chinese?
This reason I want to go abroad internship and enter Korea company in international sales.
>>> The reason is that I want to go abroad for internship, so I can enter a Korean company in international sales.
Now I’m not good at speak English, is not come true.
>>> I’m still not good at speaking English now, so I haven\'t achieved it yet.
But I continuously effort for my dream, It’s is surely come true.
>>> But I\'ll make continuous efforts for achieving my dream, so it will surely come true.

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