My recent hobby
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My recent hobby that i want to develop more is Speaking English! Actually, i enjoy studying foreign languages. So, before i start studying English, i used to studying Japanese. And now i’m into studying English. I can’t wait to speak English fluently. And i want to communicate with a lot of foreigners when i go on a trip abroad.
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My recent hobby that i want to develop more is Speaking English!
>> My recent hobby is studying and developing my English speaking skills.
Actually, i enjoy studying foreign languages.
>>These days, I enjoy studying foreign languages.
So, before i start studying English, i used to studying Japanese. And now i’m into studying English.
>>To be honest, before I started studying English, I studied Japanese first. But now, I am more into mastering English.
I can’t wait to speak English fluently.
>> CORRECT!
And i want to communicate with a lot of foreigners when i go on a trip abroad.
>> I would like to communicate with a lot of foreigners when I go on a trip abroad.
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