My relationship with a friend
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[이름], It is very nice to hear that you have met a very good friend. Keep up the good relationship you have. It is very inspiring.
-RJ
My relationship with a friend
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I met a soul sister in the US.
>>Correct
We have in common about pretty much stuff such as a concept of religion, travel, and world view.
>>We have a lot of things in common such as a concept of religion, travel and the world view.
For example, I don't believe in god evne if I want to believe in God.
>>For example, I don’t believe in god even if I want to.
It means if I believed in god, it would be a little bit eazier to live since they believe that everything that happened to them was set by God.
>>It means, if I believed in god, it would be a little easier to live since they believe that everything happening to them was set by God.
This concept makes them free to take responsibilities for what they did.
>>This concept makes them free to take responsibilitites for what they have done.
She doesn't believe in god and she also has similar ideas.
>>She doesn’t believe in God and we have similar ideas.
We have been continuing the relationship through email even though I come back to Seoul.
>>We have been continuing the relationship through e-mail even though I’m back in Seoul.
I'm SO happy to have her since she is generous so that she likes to listen to me and gives some advice from her experiences when I ask her opinions.
>>I’m so happy to have her. She is generous, she likes to listen to me and gives me advice from her experienes when I ask her opinions
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