My remember traveling

2023-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Andrea

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I write a remember traveling the my first trip. I went to trip the Osaka in Japan. Before traveling, I search for Osaka trip for hotel, transport, restaurant by web. I remember that is the clean city, delicious food and a lot of the Korean traveling people. I have very tension and nervous during traveling because of first foreign traveling, but I specially remember that.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!^^

Thank you for doing your homework!

Osaka, japan is indeed a great place.

I wish to visit the city soon!

Andrea

I write a remember traveling the my first trip.

>> I will share about my first ever travel.

I went to trip the Osaka in Japan.

>> I had a trip to Osaka, Japan.

Before traveling, I search for Osaka trip for hotel, transport, restaurant by web.

>> Before traveling, I searched about the hotels. transportations, and restaurants in Osaka from the internet.

I remember that is the clean city, delicious food and a lot of the Korean traveling people.

>> I remember that the city was clean, food were delicious, and there were a lot of Koreans travelling.

I have very tension and nervous during traveling because of first foreign traveling, but I specially remember that.

>> I as so tensed and nervous during while travelling because it is my first time travelling abroad, so I specifically remember it.

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