My research about Halloween

2015-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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After I ate my dinner,I researched about Halloween. Halloween start in 1745 . The word halloween comes from 'hollowed evening' or holy evening'.Trick or treating is a celebration for children. Children goes to other house in a funny costume and get candy and chocolate saying "trck or treat". It means you have to give me a treat or I am going to trick you. They curve pumpkins in to jack-or-laterns, lighting the bonefire. I want to celebrate and trick or treat but at Korea they don`t celebrate much. When I was at Engalnd we played Halloween haunted games at school.It was really fun. Therefore I like English school.

강사 첨삭

Hello Min!:) Happy T H U R S D A Y!   Wow! I can only imagine how enjoyable Halloween celebration is in England. I\'m in awe that you even researched about it. I know you miss those times where to go trick or treating but still don\'t be sad. You can still wear costumes, you and Emma then ask for treats from you neighbors (but with your acquaintances only,okay?^_-) Here in our office, we\'ll be having a costume party tomorrow. I\'m half excited and half anxious :p^_^  Again, thank you for this composition. I read it well. You definitely did a great job. Stay positive Min. Please take good care of yourself. See you tomorrow!^_^   ~Teacher Mayleen^_-   After I ate my dinner,I researched about Halloween. >> CORRECT OR >> I ate my dinner then I researched about Halloween.   Halloween start in 1745 . >> Halloween celebration started in 1745.   The word halloween comes from \'hollowed evening\' or holy evening\'. >> The word Halloween means \"hallowed evening\" or \"holy evening\".   Trick or treating is a celebration for children. >> Trick or treating is a Halloween custom for children.   Children goes to other house in a funny costume and get candy and chocolate saying \"trck or treat\". >> Children in costumes travel from house to house asking for treats such as candy or chocolate by saying \"trick or treat\".   It means you have to give me a treat or I am going to trick you. >> It means you have to give me a treat or I am going to play a trick on you.   They curve pumpkins in to jack-or-laterns, lighting the bonefire. >> They curve pumpkins into jack-o\'-lanters and light a bonfire. I want to celebrate and trick or treat but at Korea they don`t celebrate much. >> I want to celebrate Halloween and do trick or treat but in Korea they don\'t really celebrate it.   When I was at Engalnd we played Halloween haunted games at school. >> When I was in England we played Halloween haunted games at school.   It was really fun. >> CORRECT OR >> It was a fun moment. Therefore I like English school. >> Therefore, I like English school more.

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