My response is..
학생이 쓴 원문
If I go over bullying by someone, I think I would ignore him or her.
This is because, someone who do bullying others in order to attracting their attention.
So, I can stop their behavior by ignoring them and stopping talking with them.
But, if the situation become more serious, I cannot stop bullying from them.
강사 첨삭
Hello! Happy new week [이름]!
Truly, ignoring is the first step to stop bullying. However, bullies are absolutely persistent until they can test your capacity. That time, you have to assert yourself and think critically what step you would do to protect yourself and that bully.
Thank you for sharing your two cents for my question.
See you in class as bit later.
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
This is because, someone who do bullying others in order to attracting their attention.
>> This is because someone who bullies others attract other\'s attention.
So, I can stop their behavior by ignoring them and stopping talking with them.
>> So, I can stop their behavior by ignoring them and stopping to talk with them.
But, if the situation become more serious, I cannot stop bullying from them.
>> But, if the situation becomes more serious, I cannot stop ignoring bullying from them.
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