My retirement plans

I have ten years left until my retiring. It's time to ready retirement plans. These days, people can live more than 80 years old. Since retirement age is 45 years old, more than 35 year, I have to live without a career. That's because I prepare for retirement plans in advance. People say that things for more comfortable life of the rest of my days are the money, friends, and good health. That's right. I have to make money and friend and keep my health. I'd like to take more trips. And to do so, I need to learn English speaking. I might meet you somewhere someday. I will work harder than before. the harder I work, the better I live after retirement. postscript : Actually I don't have any plan for retirement. I will think over about it.

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