My room
학생이 쓴 원문
Since I live alone , I live in a small studio apartment.
So there is only one room there.
It is big enough for me to live in.
There is a computer, a bed and a desk in my room.
and the color of all furniture is in harmony each other.
The floor has wooden pattern. It is not real wood though.
When I stay in house,I usually spend time on the bed watching TV or
computer.
강사 첨삭
Wow, its really not that easy living alone in an apartment. Ive been there before, doing househod chores by yourself and spending most of the time along watching TV,kkkk...Anyway, Im just so proud of you, because even though you stay alone in your apartment, you managed to make yourself more productive..I commend you for a job well done...
Take care of yourself and see you later..
Since I live alone , I live in a small studio apartment.>>correctSo there is only one room there.>>There is only 1 room.It is big enough for me to live in.>>correctThere is a computer, a bed and a desk in my room.>>correctand the color of all furniture is in harmony each other.>>And the color of all furnitures harmonious with each other.The floor has wooden pattern. It is not real wood though.>>correctWhen I stay in house,I usually spend time on the bed watching TV or computer.
>>When I stay in the house, I usually spend time on watching TV or using my computer.
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