My room
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I change my room.
but I can't lie down in my bed.
today we're buy curtain and lazy back together.
all of came I think It will be beautiful. I wish curtain and lazy back coming soon.
anyway lf I add more it will be really beautiful.
so I will waiting for my room.
강사 첨삭
Hi Alice!
Wow! So you got a new room probably for yourself alone. Amazing! It means you can have your own space and have
your own privacy. Having curtains and lazy back [이름]ld make your room attractive and comfortable. Just make sure
to make it clean and organize because you\'re a young lady already. kkk^^
We\'ll talk more about this later.
I\'ll see you!
Teacher Lexi :)
Today I change my room.
>>Today, I changed my room.
OR>>Today, I transferred to another room.but I can\'t lie down in my bed.
>>But I can\'t lay down on my bed.today we\'re buy curtain and lazy back together.>>Today, were suppose to buy curtain and lazy back.all of came I think It will be beautiful.
>>I think it will all come out beautiful.
OR>>I think the result [이름]ld be beautiful.I wish curtain and lazy back coming soon. >>I wish we can really buy curtain and lazy back soon.anyway lf I add more it will be really beautiful.>>Adding it to my room will make it beautiful.
OR>>It will certainly make my room beautiful.so I will waiting for my room.
>>So I will be waiting for it.
OR>>So I\'m looking forward for it.
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