My room

2014-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lexi

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Today I change my room. but I can't lie down in my bed. today we're buy curtain and lazy back together. all of came I think It will be beautiful. I wish curtain and lazy back coming soon. anyway lf I add more it will be really beautiful. so I will waiting for my room.

강사 첨삭

Hi Alice! Wow! So you got a new room probably for yourself alone. Amazing! It means you can have your own space and have your own privacy. Having curtains and lazy back [이름]ld make your room attractive and comfortable. Just make sure to make it clean and organize because you\'re a young lady already. kkk^^ We\'ll talk more about this later. I\'ll see you! Teacher Lexi :)   Today I change my room. >>Today, I changed my room. OR>>Today, I transferred to another room.but I can\'t lie down in my bed. >>But I can\'t lay down on my bed.today we\'re buy curtain and lazy back together.>>Today, were suppose to buy  curtain and lazy back.all of came I think It will be beautiful. >>I think it will all come out beautiful. OR>>I think the result [이름]ld be beautiful.I wish curtain and lazy back coming soon. >>I wish we can really buy curtain and lazy back soon.anyway lf I add more it will be really beautiful.>>Adding it to my room will make it beautiful. OR>>It will certainly make my room beautiful.so I will waiting for my room. >>So I will be waiting for it. OR>>So I\'m looking forward for it.

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