my saturday.

2010-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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but i didn't matter about it. because it was our first meeting in this year. because of that i could understand everything. ^ ^ after finish our lunch. we went to see a movie. it was a Korean comedy movie. it descriped love between father and daughter. it was funny and gave me impression. after see a movie, we went to starbucks. my friend bought me a lipstick for my birthday present. i was very happy. we talked about our life and love. i promised to her i would come to Geo-je soon to meet her.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!! It’s nice to know that you had a great weekend!! I think you really had a great time!!! Regarding your composition, you passed here a very good one. Majority of your sentences are good. Some of your words were misspelled but it’s okay. Anyways, see you later. I am excited to talk to you. Lei J   but i didn't matter about it. >>But it didn’t matter because it was our first meeting in this year. >>because it was our first meeting this year because of that i could understand everything. ^ ^ >>correct after finish our lunch. we went to see a movie. >>after we finished our lunch, we went to see a movie. it was a Korean comedy movie. >>correct it descriped love between father and daughter. >>it relays about love between father and daughter. it was funny and gave me impression. >>It was funny and impressive after see a movie, we went to starbucks. my friend bought me a lipstick for my birthday present. >>after the movie, we went to Starbucks. My friend bought me a lipstick as a birthday present. i was very happy. >>correct we talked about our life and love. >>correct i promised to her i would come to Geo-je soon to meet her. >>I promised her that I will go back to Geo-je soon to meet her again.

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