my saturday.
학생이 쓴 원문
but i didn't matter about it. because it was our first meeting in this year. because of that i could understand everything. ^ ^ after finish our lunch. we went to see a movie. it was a Korean comedy movie. it descriped love between father and daughter. it was funny and gave me impression. after see a movie, we went to starbucks. my friend bought me a lipstick for my birthday present. i was very happy. we talked about our life and love. i promised to her i would come to Geo-je soon to meet her.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!
It’s nice to know that you had a great weekend!! I think you really had a great time!!! Regarding your composition, you passed here a very good one. Majority of your sentences are good. Some of your words were misspelled but it’s okay. Anyways, see you later. I am excited to talk to you.
Lei J
but i didn't matter about it.
>>But it didn’t matter
because it was our first meeting in this year.
>>because it was our first meeting this year
because of that i could understand everything. ^ ^
>>correct
after finish our lunch. we went to see a movie.
>>after we finished our lunch, we went to see a movie.
it was a Korean comedy movie.
>>correct
it descriped love between father and daughter.
>>it relays about love between father and daughter.
it was funny and gave me impression.
>>It was funny and impressive
after see a movie, we went to starbucks. my friend bought me a lipstick for my birthday present.
>>after the movie, we went to Starbucks. My friend bought me a lipstick as a birthday present.
i was very happy.
>>correct
we talked about our life and love.
>>correct
i promised to her i would come to Geo-je soon to meet her.
>>I promised her that I will go back to Geo-je soon to meet her again.
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