My saturday!

2012-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

학생이 쓴 원문

I will have lunch at 1:30. I will go to art academy and drawing some pictures. I will take a rest with tv or computer. And then I will have dinner with family. Last, I will make snow man and snow fight with my brother. My saturday is busy but, they are interesting!!Ha-Ha~

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Thank you for writing this composition. Please be careful with your verb tenses. Please review the corrections I made for you below. Have a nice day! --- Teacher Heidi ^^ ---   I will have lunch at 1:30. >> I had lunch at 1:30.I will go to art academy and drawing some pictures. >> I went to the art academy and drew some pictures.I will take a rest with tv or computer. >> I took a rest then watched TV and played in the computer.And then I will have dinner with family. >> And then I had dinner with my family.Last, I will make snow man and snow fight with my brother. >> Lastly, I made a snowman and played snowball fight with my brother.My saturday is busy but, they are interesting!!Ha-Ha~ >>My Saturday was busy but it was interesting!! Ha-ha~

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