My saturday!
학생이 쓴 원문
I will have lunch at 1:30.
I will go to art academy and drawing some pictures.
I will take a rest with tv or computer.
And then I will have dinner with family.
Last, I will make snow man and snow fight with my brother.
My saturday is busy but, they are interesting!!Ha-Ha~
강사 첨삭
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Have a nice day!
--- Teacher Heidi ^^ ---
I will have lunch at 1:30.
>> I had lunch at 1:30.I will go to art academy and drawing some pictures.
>> I went to the art academy and drew some pictures.I will take a rest with tv or computer.
>> I took a rest then watched TV and played in the computer.And then I will have dinner with family.
>> And then I had dinner with my family.Last, I will make snow man and snow fight with my brother.
>> Lastly, I made a snowman and played snowball fight with my brother.My saturday is busy but, they are interesting!!Ha-Ha~
>>My Saturday was busy but it was interesting!! Ha-ha~
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