My schedule!

2013-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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I think, my schedule is very busy! Because of trail period! When I finish at school, I always go to academy! Monday and Thursday, I study hard at English academy. Tuesday and Friday, I study hard at Math academy. Wednesday, I stuady hard at Society academy. Saturday, I study hard at Enlgish and Science academy. And Sunday, I study hard at Math and Korean academy. When I finish from academy, I must do my homework!!!!!!!!! Oh no~~~~!!! I hope that I get a good mark!!!!!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Sarah!!! I hope you are having a good day. Let\'s start the week right, okay? Thank you for sending your homework for today. I really appreciate it that even if you have a very hectic schedule you still managed to finish your homework. I can see on your schedule that you really are studying hard. I corrected the composition that you have sent. Please review it during your free time. Just continue to study hard and i believe that you will get good marks in your classes. I will see you later and take care. ~~T. Heidi_^-^_ I think, my schedule is very busy! >>I think my schedule is very busy.Because of trail period! >>Because of the trail period.When I finish at school, I always go to academy! >>When my class ends I have to go to the academy.Monday and Thursday, I study hard at English academy. >>Every Monday and Tuesday I have my class at English academy.Tuesday and Friday, I study hard at Math academy. >>Every Tuesday and Friday I have my class at Math academy.Wednesday, I stuady hard at Society academy. >>Every Wednesday I have my class at Society academy. Saturday, I study hard at Enlgish and Science academy.>>Every Saturday I have my class at Science academyAnd Sunday, I study hard at Math and Korean academy. >>And Every Sunday I have my class at Math and Korean academy.When I finish from academy, I must do my homework!!!!!!!!! >>Every time I\'m done with my class at the academy I have to finish my homework.Oh no~~~~!!! I hope that I get a good mark!!!!! >>I\'m hoping to get a good mark.

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