My schedule!
학생이 쓴 원문
I think, my schedule is very busy!
Because of trail period!
When I finish at school, I always go to academy!
Monday and Thursday, I study hard at English academy.
Tuesday and Friday, I study hard at Math academy.
Wednesday, I stuady hard at Society academy.
Saturday, I study hard at Enlgish and Science academy.
And Sunday, I study hard at Math and Korean academy.
When I finish from academy, I must do my homework!!!!!!!!!
Oh no~~~~!!! I hope that I get a good mark!!!!!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Sarah!!!
I hope you are having a good day.
Let\'s start the week right, okay?
Thank you for sending your homework for today.
I really appreciate it that even if you have a very hectic schedule you still managed to finish your homework.
I can see on your schedule that you really are studying hard.
I corrected the composition that you have sent. Please review it during your free time.
Just continue to study hard and i believe that you will get good marks in your classes.
I will see you later and take care.
~~T. Heidi_^-^_
I think, my schedule is very busy!
>>I think my schedule is very busy.Because of trail period!
>>Because of the trail period.When I finish at school, I always go to academy!
>>When my class ends I have to go to the academy.Monday and Thursday, I study hard at English academy.
>>Every Monday and Tuesday I have my class at English academy.Tuesday and Friday, I study hard at Math academy.
>>Every Tuesday and Friday I have my class at Math academy.Wednesday, I stuady hard at Society academy.
>>Every Wednesday I have my class at Society academy.
Saturday, I study hard at Enlgish and Science academy.>>Every Saturday I have my class at Science academyAnd Sunday, I study hard at Math and Korean academy.
>>And Every Sunday I have my class at Math and Korean academy.When I finish from academy, I must do my homework!!!!!!!!!
>>Every time I\'m done with my class at the academy I have to finish my homework.Oh no~~~~!!! I hope that I get a good mark!!!!!
>>I\'m hoping to get a good mark.
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