My school show!

Today our classmates had time to show each other their intelligent.So my team prepared an ochestra.In the orchestra there was a Flute,Cello,Ocarina,Violin,and Piano.We played 나가거든(If i leave).The song was so beautiful and fantastic.Beacuse our team pratice alot.When it was our turn all of my classmates pay attention to our orchestra.And i was very proud of my team members.After we finish all of my classmates stould up and give us a big hands.I as so happy.I think it will be good memorise before we graduate Elementry school.I want to thanks to my orchestra members to follow well when we pratice.

Hello! Thanks for sending in a composition! Good job on your successful performance! I hope you continue improving well. I am extatic to hear more about your success. Keep creating more wonderful memories before you graduate from elementary! (^__^) Today our classmates had time to show each other their intelligent. >> Today our classmates had time to show each other their talents. So my team prepared an ochestra. >> Correct! In the orchestra there was a Flute,Cello,Ocarina,Violin,and Piano. >> Remember that you only need to capitalize the first letter of PROPER NOUNS (names of people, specific places, countries, or brand of products) Example: Karen, [이름], Korea, Samsung etc. >> The instruments in our orchestra were the flute, cello, ocarina, violin and piano. We played 나