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2. Social Networking Websites' Positive and Negative Aspects
출처: ebse.co.kr
These days, a growing number of people are using social networking services(SNS). These are helpful in many ways. You can keep in touch with your friend easily.
However, as everything has both bright and dark sides. When using social networking websites, you have to be very careful. This is because social media consists of personal information. Your personal information can be misused for bad purposes by bad people.
SNS can be very useful in many ways, but we should be very careful in using them. Let's use them constructively rather than destructively!
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2. Social Networking Websites' Positive and Negative Aspects
These days, a growing number of people are using social networking services(SNS).
These days, a growing number of people are using social networking services(SNS).
These are helpful in many ways.
You can keep in touch with your friend easily.
However, as everything has both bright and dark sides.
However, as everything has both bright and dark sides.
When using social networking websites, you have to be very careful.
This is because social media consists of personal information.
Your personal information can be misused for bad purposes by bad people.
SNS can be very useful in many ways, but we should be very careful in using them.
SNS can be very useful in many ways, but we should be very careful in using them.
Let's use them constructively rather than destructively!
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