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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Aurora.
Hi. Thank you for your considering feedback including comment.
I'd like to do english composition. But, I wonder that I can't find topic in this homepage. What do I write about? (Is it correct? ^^;;)
Anyway, I'll use the words you given to me 'task of the day'.
-The weather looks prosperous for the tour.
-I feel auspicious energy from you.
-My daughter is just 3 years old. So, she repeat feeling like felicity or unhappiness several time in a day.
-I have cognition that I am two children's mom.
-I'll endeavor to study english.
I don't know if upper sentences are correct or not. Please let me know. Thank you.
Then, have a nice day. Bye~~.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition. I hope I helped you. Just keep up the good work. Having two children is a noble prize already. Have a nice day!
T. Aurora
Here are my corrections:
Hi, Aurora.>>CorrectHi. Thank you for your considering feedback including comment.
>> Hi! Thank you for considering my feedback and including the comment. I\'d like to do english composition.
>> I\'d like to do English composition.
But, I wonder that I can\'t find topic in this homepage.
>> But, I wonder that I can\'t find any topic in this homepage.
What do I write about? (Is it correct? ^^;;)
>> What will I write about? (Is it correct? ^^;;)Anyway, I\'ll use the words you given to me \'task of the day\'. >> Anyway, I\'ll use the words you\'ve given to me on \'task of the day\'. -The weather looks prosperous for the tour.
>>The weather looks prosperous during the tour. -I feel auspicious energy from you.
>>Correct -My daughter is just 3 years old. So, she repeat feeling like felicity or unhappiness several time in a day.
>>My daughter is just 3 years old. So, she has the same feeling like felicity or unhappiness several times in a day. -I have cognition that I am two children\'s mom.
>>I have a cognition that I am a mom of two children. -I\'ll endeavor to study english.
>>I\'ll endeavor to study English. I don\'t know if upper sentences are correct or not. Please let me know. Thank you.
>> I don\'t know if the sentences above are correct or not. Please let me know. Thank you.Then, have a nice day. Bye~~.
>> Correct
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