My short-term and long-term goals are..

2022-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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My short-term and long-term goals are to be able to do whatever you want. To be honest, it\'s not specific to say this, but I think it\'s the most important thing. My short-term and long-term goals are to find what I want right now, to do what I like and want, and to be able to do what I want, even as a hobby, even if I don\'t have the job I want.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


My short-term and long-term goals are to be able to do whatever you want. 
>>> My short-term and long-term goals are to be able to do whatever I want. 

To be honest, it\'s not specific to say this, but I think it\'s the most important thing. 
>>> CORRECT!

My short-term and long-term goals are to find what I want right now, to do what I like and want, and to be able to do what I want, even as a hobby, even if I don\'t have the job I want.
>>> CORRECT!

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