My sister

2010-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Just few minutes ago,I was in my younger sister's room. She was sleeping. It looks cute. But I had fight with her on yesterday, so I put my legs on hers legs. In hers dream, maybe she was attacked by person. She took away hers leg from my legs, she raised it, and hit me. Ahhhh~!I wanted to hit her too. But my father was sleeping next to her,so I couldn't. If she wake up,I'll talk her about this happen except I put my leg on hers legs.haha-

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!I'm so glad to receive another composition form you! Thank you so much for writing one for me. I find this story funny. Thank you for giving me a good laugh! Take care and have a nice day!T. JanE ^^ Just few minutes ago,I was in my younger sister's room.>> Just a few minutes ago, I was in my younger sister's room.She was sleeping.>> correctIt looks cute.>> She looks cute.But I had fight with her on yesterday, so I put my legs on hers legs.>> I had a fight with her yesterday, so when I saw her sleeping, I put my legs on hers.In hers dream, maybe she was attacked by person.>> Maybe she thought she was dreaming of being attacked by someone.She took away hers leg from my legs, she raised it, and hit me.>> She took away her leg from mine, she raised it, and it hit me.Ahhhh~!I wanted to hit her too.>> correct ^^But my father was sleeping next to her,so I couldn't.>> correctIf she wake up,I'll talk her about this happen except I put my leg on hers legs.haha- >> When she gets up, I'll tell her about this, but I won't tell her that I put my legs on hers. ^^

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