My sitation
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
I forgot your class, I\'m sorry. I got a lot of training and worked as a distributor. Honestly, I checked my documents and sent it to a colleague of our company. at time you called me, my colleague called me too. so I could not have your lesson. I think my ability of English still is not good, but it is getting better. Yesterday, I could understand company lesson a lots. in my opinion, I can maybe hear a fast English talking after 1 year.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
No need to say sorry. See you later in our class ^^
T. DON
Dear [Name],
I forgot your class, I\'m sorry.
I forgot your class, I\'m sorry.
>> CORRECT
I got a lot of training and worked as a
distributor.
>> CORRECT
Honestly, I checked my documents and sent it to a colleague
of our company. at time you called me, my colleague called me too. so I
could not have your lesson.
>> Honestly, I checked my documents and sent it to a colleague of our company and at that time you called me. After a while my colleague called me so I could not have your lesson.
I think my ability of English still is not
good, but it is getting better. Yesterday, I could understand company
lesson a lots. in my opinion, I can maybe hear a fast English talking
after 1 year.
>> I think my English ability is still not
good, but it is getting better. Yesterday, I could understand the company \'s
lesson a lot. In my opinion, maybe I can understand English conversation after 1 year.
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