My situation.

2021-11-23 · 첨삭 강사 Don

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name], I was sorry not to finish your lesson today. I forgot it, because I was worry about my father. I didn\'t see my father after going into hospital. So I had no time to think the other thing. I was sorry I could not have your lesson today. Tomorrow, I am going to present value selling in front of vice president. Today I wanted to get your advice about this presentation But I couldn\'t. Please give me a good luck for my presentation. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

See you later in our class ^^

T. DON

Dear [Name],

I was sorry not to finish your lesson today. I forgot it, because I was worry about my father.

>> I was sorry not to finish your lesson today. I forgot it, because I was worried about my father.

I didn\'t see my father after going into hospital. So I had no time to think the other thing.

>> I have no chance to visit my father in the hospital. So I had no time to think of other things.

I was sorry I could not have your lesson today.

>> CORRECT

Tomorrow, I am going to present value selling in front of vice president. Today I wanted to get your advice about this presentation But I couldn\'t.

>> Tomorrow, I am going to present about value selling in front of our Vice President. Today, I wanted to get your advice about this presentation But I couldn\'t.

Please give me a good luck for my presentation.

>> Please wish me luck for my presentation.

Thank you.

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