My skinny body
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In fact, I have never been on a diet for my whole life. Maybe some one can envy me. But please believe that skinny body is my insecurity. I really hate hearing \"you look so skinny\" or \"you should eat something more\". And people has supposed that I would be very sensitive or picky but, no I\'m not. Fortunately, Thanks to my husband who loves snacks, I gain 3kg after I was married. If I gain 2kg more than the current weight, I think it will be perfect for me.
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Hi [이름]!
Continue doing good work.
I can really depend on your consistency.
I look forward to see you blossom and your skills develop.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In fact, I have never been on a diet for my whole life.
>> In fact, I have never been on a diet my whole life.
Maybe some one can envy me.
>> Maybe, others could envy me.
But please believe that skinny body is my insecurity.
>> However, please believe that having a skinny body is my insecurity.
I really hate hearing \"you look so skinny\" or \"you should eat something more\".
>> I really hate hearing statements like, \"You look so skinny\" or \"You should eat something more\".
And people has supposed that I would be very sensitive or picky but, no I\'m not.
>> People also suppose that I would be very sensitive or picky but, no I\'m not.
Fortunately, Thanks to my husband who loves snacks, I gain 3kg after I was married.
>> Fortunately, thanks to my husband who loves snacks, I gained 3 kg after I was married.
If I gain 2kg more than the current weight, I think it will be perfect for me.
>> If I gain 2 kg more than my current weight, I think it will be perfect for me.
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