My son is coming!
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Saturday, I heard from my wife that the sex of our baby is boy. I have not said that I prefer boy or girl so far. However, frankly speaking, I feel very happy to know that our baby boy is coming, not baby girl. Probably, it caused by the situation that none of my cousins got a boy. All of them are rasing baby girls, actually.
It is interesting that I have tried not to be tied by any traditions or customs, but I find that I am not free from the thought the Korean men typically wish to get a baby boy.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday again! Congratulations! I know that you are excited to have a baby by now.^^ It would be very exciting to take care of it.See you again tomorrow!
--- T. Kelly
Last Saturday, I heard from my wife that the sex of our baby is boy.
>> Last Saturday, I heard from my wife that the sex of our baby is a male.
I have not said that I prefer boy or girl so far.
>> CORRECT!
However, frankly speaking, I feel very happy to know that our baby boy is coming, not baby girl.
>> However, frankly speaking, I feel very happy to know that our baby is a boy.
Probably, it caused by the situation that none of my cousins got a boy.
>> Probably, it\'s because none of my cousins got a boy.
All of them are rasing baby girls, actually.
>> All of them are raising baby girls, actually.
It is interesting that I have tried not to be tied by any traditions or customs, but I find that I am not free from the thought the Korean men typically wish to get a baby boy.
>> It is interesting that I have tried not to be tied by any traditions or customs, but I think that I am not free from the thought that Korean men typically wish to have a baby boy.
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