My Spare Time
학생이 쓴 원문
I have not much spare time every day.
It\'s because I have spare time about 2 hours.
However, it is not really my rest time.
I usually have to do my backlog of homework.
I think I\'m very pitiful, but it is K-secondary student.
So, I can\'t enjoy my spare time.
However, sometimes I have some spare time.
At the time, I use my smart phone or get some rest.
The time is my the only paradise.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for still taking the time to do your homework.
The sentences you used were right on point.
They are direct and most are grammatically correct.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I have not much spare time every day.
>> I don\'t have that much spare time every day.
It\'s because I have spare time about 2 hours.
It\'s because I have spare time about 2 hours.
>> It\'s because my spare time is usually about 2 hours.
However, it is not really my rest time.
However, it is not really my rest time.
>> Correct
I usually have to do my backlog of homework.
I usually have to do my backlog of homework.
>> I usually have to do a backlog of my homework.
I think I\'m very pitiful, but it is K-secondary student.
I think I\'m very pitiful, but it is K-secondary student.
>> I think I\'m very pitiful, but this is the life of a K-secondary student.
So, I can\'t enjoy my spare time.
So, I can\'t enjoy my spare time.
>> Correct
However, sometimes I have some spare time.
However, sometimes I have some spare time.
>> However, sometimes, I have some spare time.
At the time, I use my smart phone or get some rest.
At the time, I use my smart phone or get some rest.
>> Correct
The time is my the only paradise.
The time is my the only paradise.
>> This is the only time when I feel like I\'m in paradise.
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