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학생이 쓴 원문
I had a meditation time. A meditation time made me reflect myself what I did wrong and what I have to do. This time made me feel better and I could arrange my confused mind. Therefore, at this time, Japanese fencing studio relaxed my thinking and body. So, this place is kike a jewel.
강사 첨삭
Ji Hee,
A time for self reflection is really necessary for each person. This is the time when she relaxes and takes into account what she had done. It is also a time to think about the next thing she’s going to do. You are lucky you have a place where you could step back and meditate. Keep it up! ^^
XOXO, Jenny
I had a meditation time.
>>Correct.
>>I had a time for meditation.
A meditation time made me reflect myself what I did wrong and what I have to do.
>> Meditating helps me reflect on myself, what I did wrong and what I have to do.
This time made me feel better and I could arrange my confused mind.
>>This time makes me feel better and helps me organize my confused mind.
Therefore, at this time, Japanese fencing studio relaxed my thinking and body. So, this place is kike a jewel.
>> At this time, Japanese fencing studio aids me in making my mind and body relaxed so this place is like a jewel.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.