My stomachache!

2013-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 heidi

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I had stomachache because of acute indigestion !! I was very hungry, so I ate quickly!! So I had stomachache and vomited!! But I have to go to English academy! I can't do my English homework! And my stomachache still sick! So I took a day off on account of stomachache,,, But Next day, I get well~^^ I'm so happy^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

How are you feeling now?

I hope that your stomachache is all gone today.

Stay healthy always!

Have a nice day!

---- Teacher Heidi ^^ ----

I had stomachache because of acute indigestion !!

>> Correct!

>> Or: I had a stomachache because of acute indigestion!!
I was very hungry, so I ate quickly!!

>> Correct.
So I had stomachache and vomited!!

>> So I had a stomachache and vomited!!
But I have to go to English academy!

>> But I had to go to the English academy!
I can\'t do my English homework!

>> I couldn\'t do my English homework.
And my stomachache still sick!

>> And my stomach is still sick!
So I took a day off on account of stomachache,,,

>> So I took a day off on account of my stomachache.
But Next day, I get well~^^

>> But the next day, I got better. ~^^
I\'m so happy^^

>> Correct.

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