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2011-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Verna i'm sorry to late. I forgot the home work, But i will try to write it right away As you know my baby is very young. He is only 5 Month old. So i can read only picture book. But there are very short sentence, So I can read it for my baby. I have read a book about the baby&mom crocodile' story. Of course there are many picture, but text isn't. But~!! My Baby like it very much.

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Hello there [이름],        I received your composition while we were having class. Anyway, thank you so much for doing it. i can feel your diligence because of it. Take care! See you on Monday! -T.Verna-   Hi Verna i\'m sorry to late. >>Hi Verna! I\'m sorry it\'s late.I forgot the home work, >>I forgot the homework.But i will try to write it right away>>But I will still try to write it right away.As you know my baby is very young. >>CorrectHe is only 5 Month old. >>He is only 5 months old.So i can read only picture book. >>So, I can only show him the picture of the book.But there are very short sentence,So I can read it for my baby. >>But there are very short sentences, so I can read it for my baby.I have read a book about the baby&mom crocodile\' story. >>I have read the about baby and mom crocodile\'s story.Of course there are many picture, but text isn\'t. >>Of course, there are many pictures but there are only few texts.But~!! My Baby like it very much. >>Correct

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