My story
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Verna i'm sorry to late.
I forgot the home work,
But i will try to write it right away
As you know my baby is very young.
He is only 5 Month old.
So i can read only picture book.
But there are very short sentence,
So I can read it for my baby.
I have read a book about the baby&mom crocodile' story.
Of course there are many picture, but text isn't.
But~!! My Baby like it very much.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
I received your composition while we were having class. Anyway, thank you so much for doing it. i can feel your diligence because of it. Take care!
See you on Monday!
-T.Verna-
Hi Verna i\'m sorry to late.
>>Hi Verna! I\'m sorry it\'s late.I forgot the home work,
>>I forgot the homework.But i will try to write it right away>>But I will still try to write it right away.As you know my baby is very young.
>>CorrectHe is only 5 Month old.
>>He is only 5 months old.So i can read only picture book.
>>So, I can only show him the picture of the book.But there are very short sentence,So I can read it for my baby.
>>But there are very short sentences, so I can read it for my baby.I have read a book about the baby&mom crocodile\' story.
>>I have read the about baby and mom crocodile\'s story.Of course there are many picture, but text isn\'t.
>>Of course, there are many pictures but there are only few texts.But~!! My Baby like it very much.
>>Correct
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